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Idk, made this yesterday... i think.
but now i think i should finish the last
commission.

and then rest, ish sick ):

Character(c)Detts
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(the finished verision of this picture here: [link] )
:iconantheilo:
Oh man, she's really pretty! I absolutely love her hair, you've made it flow so nicely. There aren't many errors here at all, though I think it would be even better with a background, as somebody already suggested. Making her overlook a landscape longingly would fit nicely - she's got this sort of nostalgic look in her eyes.

The shading is gorgeous, though maybe it would be even better if you used some warmer tones for the shading? Seeing as you've shaded both her body and her hair, I think it would add even more depth if you added some shades and highlights to her dress aswell.

And that is pretty much all I have to say. The anatomy is looking great, though I think it would do good to make the arm a bit shorter. Apart from that; Great work! I hope my critique will be of some help. uwu

And also; Get well! Being sick is never any fun. );
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~Domzino Aug 29, 2011  Student Photographer
Aw, that's really nice. Now it just needs to be on top of a grassy mountain, looking over the cliff into the sea.

Also, you're sick? :C
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:icondetts:
that would be a great idea o3o i didn't know what to do with her xD Hehe

): yes, urgh. Someone most have infect me in school xd
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